This is a short video of two classmates that are reviewing my magazine front cover, contents page and double page spread and also commenting on positives and negatives. I filmed the video on an iPhone 4 and uploaded it to YouTube before embedding it in my blog. Some of the most common possible improvements highlighted were that some of the contents was too minimalistic and that I could have used the space more efficiently, which for majority I completely agree with. However i was going for a more simplistic look so some of the features picked up on, were in fact deliberate. The most common positives where about the colour scheme and the fact that it wasn't too cluttered and that it kept a uniform style throughout the sections of the magazine, which is what I was trying to achieve so I'm pleased with this outcome.